Marry-Sue Meme

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I'm doing this with 

Jenna, not Tamia. Jenna's name will be changing here soon. I wanted to do this because I want to see where she is standing at the moment and what may need to be added/changed. I did some side notes for myself. 



1. [  ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [  ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [  ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [ /] They are physically strong.  (She doesn't have much for upper body strength)
5. [  ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.
6. [  ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [  ] This eye color happens to be red. 
8. [  ] Their eyes change color.
9. [  ] They have wings.
10. [  ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. 
11. [  ] They are immortal. 
12. [  ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13. [  ] [If male.] They are very muscular. 
14. [  ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. 
15. [  ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc. 
16. [/] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. (She can tell when something isn't right?)
17. [x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18. [  ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19. [  ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20. [  ] They are a healer.
21. [  ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22. [  ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23. [x] They have lost one/both of their parents. (Father left when young and Mother will pass from illness)
24. [  ] They ran away from home. 
25. [  ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26. [x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (The siblings will be at their mothers bedside when she passes)
27. [  ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. 
28. [  ] They never knew their parents.
29. [  ] They were abused/spoiled as a child. 
30. [  ] They are very attractive to the same gender.  
31. [  ] They have lots of friends/no friends. (She has some friends, not a lot though and none that are well known. Same with all of her family)
32. [ /] They are emo/cutesy. 
33. [x] They look much younger/older than they really are. (I just draw this way. But She does look younger than she really is.)
34. [  ] They are currently in a relationship. 
35. [/] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. (Kinda on the moral, but does not declare them)
36. [  ] They have a mental disorder. 
37. [x] They have an emotional disorder. (An unrealistic fear of her sister being in danger all the time?)
38. [  ] They struggle to stay sane.
39. [  ] They are a psycho.
40. [  ] They have multiple personalities.
41. [  ] They are very intelligent. 
42. [  ] They have hallucinations.
43. [  ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
44. [  ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45. [x] They have a guardian spirit. (Tamia?)
46. [  ] They have a 'special type' of soul. 
47. [  ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48. [  ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49. [  ] Some part of their body glows.  
50. [  ] They have a rare/unusual name.
51. [  ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52. [  ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53. [  ] They are connected with a certain element.
54. [x] They are connected with a certain animal. (Tamia...?)
55. [  ] They always dress like a certain 'label'. (I don't really think so? She dresses how she feels)
56. [  ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
57. [  ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood. (...I don't really think so. Not from what I have seen.)
58. [  ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared. 
59. [  ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives. 
60. [  ] They are hiding from someone/something.
61. [  ] They have a rare blood type.
62. [  ] They cry blood.
63. [  ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
64. [x] They are from a different country to where they live. (Born in Canada, moved to France because of family)
65. [  ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66. [  ] They are very lively/happy.
67. [  ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68. [x] They are very patient. (Pretty mellow unless under extreme stress)
69. [  ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70. [x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (To be able to transform?)
71. [  ] They have amnesia. 
72. [  ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73. [   ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74. [   ]  They are 'the chosen one'.
75. [   ] They have insomnia.

Overall Points: 13
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Point Reduction:
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements.

1. [  ] They smoke.
2. [  ] They are an alcoholic. (She does drink responsibly?)
3. [x] They are overweight.
4. [  ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [  ] They have a short temper.
6. [  ] They enjoy bullying others. 
7. [  ] They do not care much about others.
8. [x] They are relatively emotionless. (She appears composed most of the time. Making it seem that she is emotionless.)
9. [x] They have some sort of permanent medical condition. (Her nose appears normal but her nostrils are smaller than average, making it hard for her to breath. She has a hard time keeping her skin from being dry no matter where she lives or does.)

Total: 10


RESULT:

5: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15: Balanced Character. 
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... NOW.